I've always liked this part from The Saltness of Time:
"The quiet was remarkable. I had never known quiet could have such intensity. The wind had stopped. No tree limbs creaked. The highway was shut down, so no rumble of distant semi-trucks existed. I started thinking how I had never heard such a silence before when I realized I was feeling vibrations. Sensory deprivation will cause hallucinations. Maybe it was the lack of sound that made me believe the acres of snow had become a vast sounding board stretching over the prairie and bringing to me the vibrations of its past. But there was no doubt to me then, nor is there now, that I heard Indian ponies passing in the night, and I could feel the heart throbs of a terror-struck pioneer family, huddled, praying for God to protect their lives in a dismal soddie. I heard, then, too, the shouts of children in an ancient Pawnee settlement, ignorant of what would follow a Spaniard's search for gold. I heard a shovel scoop out earth to make room for a tiny coffin, and sobs tore at my heart. My body was rocked by the thuds of buffalo bodies, one after another, hitting the prairie as a hunter decimated a herd. And then I actually felt the vibrations as the first plow ripped the sod and make the entire prairie sigh. It sighed the word 'land.' Land, it's a word as magic as the sea, isn't it? There even reached to me the sounds of monster fish from when Kansas was, for thousands of years, a great inland sea, only to dry up, like dreams, and leave beds of salt and shark's teeth for a Kansas boy to wonder at."
And look at that. A sentence ending with a no-no: "at."
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Showing posts with label short story. Show all posts
Sunday, August 23, 2015
Tuesday, July 14, 2015
Hey, It's Okay to Admire What You've Written
Well, sometimes you reread something you've written and say, "Damn, that's good:" From One More VictimHer face at that moment is still the sweetest vision I have ever seen. It was full of yearning, yet already satisfied. Her complexion mirrored the innocence of her heart, untouched yet by the cruelty of the world and the far greater cruelty of our expectations for ourselves in that world. She opened her eyes and leaned her forehead to rest against my lips. I whispered her name as though it were magic. We were in another world.
Wednesday, June 17, 2015
Thanks to a Hutchinson Photographer I Have a New Image for Cover of "One More Victim"
I think one of my favorite things about the internet is Facebook. Yes, I spend too much time on it. I got on because it seemed an avenue to promote books. It became a lot more. It became a place to meet really neat and nice and interesting people, so many of them with different talents.
One of those persons is a photographer from Hutchinson, Kansas, where I started my adult career as reporter and later an editor at The Hutchinson News.
I don't remember how I first met Kristen Garlow Piper on FB, but meet her I did and enjoyed her photos of the remodeling of a Hutch downtown building into apartments. Appreciated, too, her many other photos. She seems to specialize in weather shots. I got her permission to use one of her rural photos for the cover of the short story Innocent Passage.
The other day she posted an image that just blew me away. I have fun taking a photo to see how it might work as a book cover. Here's the original image.
Here's the fun cover I did for a non-existent book.
Then I thought: hey, I do have a story that would be perfect for this cover. So I changed the cover for One More Victim to use this cover.
Curious why the story One More Victim works for this image? You're just going to have to get that ebook.
Photo details: Kristen used a standard night shot/tripod with cable release - ISO 100 - Shutter open 30 sec - 1/100 shutter speed. She said storms had been building all evening with the lightning starting around 10 p.m. She shot it with a Nikon D7000 and a Nikon 24-70 lens.
One of those persons is a photographer from Hutchinson, Kansas, where I started my adult career as reporter and later an editor at The Hutchinson News.
I don't remember how I first met Kristen Garlow Piper on FB, but meet her I did and enjoyed her photos of the remodeling of a Hutch downtown building into apartments. Appreciated, too, her many other photos. She seems to specialize in weather shots. I got her permission to use one of her rural photos for the cover of the short story Innocent Passage.
The other day she posted an image that just blew me away. I have fun taking a photo to see how it might work as a book cover. Here's the original image.
Here's the fun cover I did for a non-existent book.
Then I thought: hey, I do have a story that would be perfect for this cover. So I changed the cover for One More Victim to use this cover.
Curious why the story One More Victim works for this image? You're just going to have to get that ebook.
Photo details: Kristen used a standard night shot/tripod with cable release - ISO 100 - Shutter open 30 sec - 1/100 shutter speed. She said storms had been building all evening with the lightning starting around 10 p.m. She shot it with a Nikon D7000 and a Nikon 24-70 lens.
Monday, January 12, 2015
Are You a Kindle Unlimited Subscriber?
Kindle offers for $9.99 free access to hundreds of thousands of books. Thought I would list the works I have enrolled in that program:
Novel: Then and Now: The Harmony of the Instantaneous All Set in Lawrence, KS and The University of Kansas during that turbulent spring of 1970
Novel: The 41st Sermon Episcopal priest at mid-life and mid-faith crisis gets involved with beautiful blonde parishioner and her phony kidnap plot
Sci-fi short story By Pain Possessed Can the weakest human save us all?
Short story about a solo round of golf: Downswing
Sci fi novella: A Match Made in Heaven The Mormons leave Earth to populate the Planet Moroni and discover their destiny among the stars and themselves
Literary novella: One More Victim Because the Holocaust is a critical element in this three-part story, it has broken through the top 100 in world literature>Jewish
Collection of shorts: Hospital Days 14-year-old boy learns some life lessons working as a candy striper in a small town hospital
Short story. The Richard Dary Weight Loss Institute The best weight loss program is the one you can't remember
Novel: The 41st Sermon Episcopal priest at mid-life and mid-faith crisis gets involved with beautiful blonde parishioner and her phony kidnap plot
Sci-fi short story By Pain Possessed Can the weakest human save us all?
Short story about a solo round of golf: Downswing
Sci fi novella: A Match Made in Heaven The Mormons leave Earth to populate the Planet Moroni and discover their destiny among the stars and themselves
Literary novella: One More Victim Because the Holocaust is a critical element in this three-part story, it has broken through the top 100 in world literature>Jewish
Collection of shorts: Hospital Days 14-year-old boy learns some life lessons working as a candy striper in a small town hospital
Short story. The Richard Dary Weight Loss Institute The best weight loss program is the one you can't remember
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Tuesday, December 2, 2014
Golf, the Supreme Sport
This is the newspaper column I wrote that led me to compose the fiction short story Downswing.
Golf, of course,
is the supreme sport. I use sport here in the truest sense of the word. More
people may watch baseball or football. Youth baseball and beer-belly, adult
softball may its legions. More sweat may be produced on the tennis courts. Golf
shines as the pinnacle of sports and self-involvement.
In the first
place, a normal physique is more than adequate for the game. To play football,
you have to be bear. To mash home runs you need forearms the size of Easter
hams. But, even the most svelte of forms can learn to knock the golf ball a
respectable distance. The over-muscled and large-sized man who tries to use his
force alone to crush the golf ball will find it dribbling off the tee in
mockery or whizzing in a slice lost amongst the trees.
Timing, rhythm,
grace, and balance are the qualities to make a golf ball sit up and take
notice. Grip the golf club too hard and you destroy the muscular fluidity golf
requires. Bad shots bring tension; tension leads to more bad shots. Golf
teaches the blend of mental balance and muscular control.
No other sport
requires the full range of using one's muscles: from crushing a drive to
tickling a delicate putt ,the small "plunk" in the hole the required
sound so the previous satisfyingly crack of the drive has real meaning.
Baseball players
who can knock the ball over the fence tell me that feeling is nothing compared
to the glory of a long drive. "It makes you shiver all over."
Other sports
require umpires and referees. The dishonest golfer suffers in his own hell:
taking gimmes on putts he's not sure could make, not counting strokes he ought,
playing Mulligans. There are hundreds of ways to cheat at golf, but the one who
is cheated is the golfer himself. Most learn this soon. Most beginners soon
find satisfaction in honestly breaking 100 on a decent course, breaking 100
with no gimmes, no Mulligans and all the penalty strokes counted.
You've seen
baseball, basketball, and football players whine, cry, shout, argue with
officials about penalties called. The real golfer, with only God as his witness,
calls penalty strokes on himself.
In what other sport
does the key point of action before a crowd bring that crowd to absolute
silenced? It exemplifies that key element in golf that makes it supreme – courtesy.
Talk about your
game of inches! After traversing 440 yards on a long par four, the game, the
tournament, one's wits may come down to the small white ball taking one more
roll to plop victoriously into the hole – or sit in abject misery at its edge.
In golf, you can
play along or with friends, with strangers, or with enemies. And you learn
something new about yourself – and them – every time.
Golf is a sport
that will last your lifetime. You can begin it young and finish your life with
it as an old man. What other sport, besides fishing, can be your lifetime
companion?
Golf is a harsh
but lovely mistress: lulling you, exciting you, embarrassing you.
Ben Hogan once
noted that it should be perfectly possible for someone to birdie every hole, yet
no pro has ever shot 18 under in a PGA tournament. Golf has no master. The best
you can hope for, dream for, dedicate your life to, are those precious moments
of sacred bliss when individual shots work and you are left alone in the
universe with your humble glory.
Thursday, November 28, 2013
Short Story "Confidence" Published by New Digital Publication "Eleven to Seven"
Thanks to an alphabetical listing, my short story
"Confidence" is the first story listed in a new digital publication
"Eleven to Seven."
I think we're going to see more and more of these sorts of creative outlets
open up. I hadn't published "Confidence" myself, so I am glad it has
now found a home. The author who gives away his fiction for these sorts of
endeavors hopes exposure to the published piece prompts a reader to search for
more of his or her work.
I wrote "Confidence" when I was in my twenties. I
was exploring the short story environment. I thought the piece of fiction at
less than 500 words worked well, but it was never accepted to the literary
journals where I submitted it. And so it sat in the file cabinet for, well,
decades now.
I think it shows what can be accomplished in the short
format. A character is established and something life-changing occurs to him. The
challenge is to make it occur for the reader in a convincing and connecting
sort of way. Hope you'll check it out.
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